Couple of my manipulations. (Time-lapse+ Final Image)

[D2AP]

Feel free to criticize

 

[Inkz]

These are really good.

The Lock On image, the one thing that strikes me is the planes look stationary, add a motion blur to them then it's all good.

Great work.

 

[WillAS471]

"Pain Inside" looks very hip, good job.

 

[D2AP]

These are really good.

The Lock On image, the one thing that strikes me is the planes look stationary, add a motion blur to them then it's all good.

Great work.

Thanks guys and yes I had considered adding motion blur wasn't sure that it would be necessary or really even improve anything. I still have the PSD so I might modify it I appreciate the feed back.

 

[Inkz]

Just a slight motion blur will make the planes look more realistic while zipping through the air lol.

But I really like your work.

Are you on DeviantArt?

 

[D2AP]

I am but pretty much never use it, I need to get more active on there. I have a website with a portfolio though and 2 Youtube channels. I can give you the links if you want to see.

 

[M I S A K I]

i liked the first one more despite that they are both good , great work

 

[S0ul]

Love the first one mate!

 

[D2AP]

Thank you!