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    New Website

    Hi

    Please have a look at my new work www.hd-foods.com

    thanks in advance
    musto

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    New Website

    That looks great musto. I particularly like the images of the dishes changing as my cursor moves over the menu and the one animated GIF you used is really well done. It actually enhances the page and doesn't become annoying. Well done! :} :} :}

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    The site looks fine musto but some of the text on the Services page needs tidying up, (see pic).

    I would suggest rewriting that first paragraph as:

    "We offer a range of catering options and can cater for any number of guests. Whether you are having a conference, a business reception, annual party, dinner party, birthday party or any other function you can rest assured you will receive the highest standard of service."

    I would also suggest you don't use capital letters for "Provide Freshly" and the last item has a couple of spelling errors - it should be
    "We provide disposable plates, cups, rolls of table paper, napkins, knives and forks."

    I hope you don't mind these comments. I'm looking at the list of services as if I were a customer.

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    New Website

    Send me a few plates!

    I love that kind of food %}

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    Thanks a lot Welles & Joed for appreciating my work.

    Thanks so much Shaun for valuable suggestions and pointing out horrible horrible grammer and spelling mistakes. [stuned] I've made all the changes you had pointed and suggested.

    Thanks again
    musto

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    I think that the animated image of food plates is a bit fast. Perhaps it would be better with a calmer pace and fading transitions.

    /Moltas

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    Just looking at past stuff...

    Just looking at past requests...
    I like the site, very clean...
    Don't know if my dsl connection is a bit off today but the site loaded very slowly. Once it was up it seemed fine. Tried it a couple of time and it seemed slow for no apparent reason?

    I like the simplicity of the site.

    Lasa

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    New Website

    Very nice, musto.

 

 

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