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Old 03-28-2005, 03:46 PM
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Hi

Please have a look at my new work www.hd-foods.com

thanks in advance
musto

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Old 03-29-2005, 12:59 AM
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That looks great musto. I particularly like the images of the dishes changing as my cursor moves over the menu and the one animated GIF you used is really well done. It actually enhances the page and doesn't become annoying. Well done!

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Old 03-30-2005, 08:20 AM
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The site looks fine musto but some of the text on the Services page needs tidying up, (see pic).

I would suggest rewriting that first paragraph as:

"We offer a range of catering options and can cater for any number of guests. Whether you are having a conference, a business reception, annual party, dinner party, birthday party or any other function you can rest assured you will receive the highest standard of service."

I would also suggest you don't use capital letters for "Provide Freshly" and the last item has a couple of spelling errors - it should be
"We provide disposable plates, cups, rolls of table paper, napkins, knives and forks."

I hope you don't mind these comments. I'm looking at the list of services as if I were a customer.

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Old 03-31-2005, 12:22 AM
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Send me a few plates!

I love that kind of food

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Old 03-31-2005, 06:35 PM
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Thanks

Thanks a lot Welles & Joed for appreciating my work.

Thanks so much Shaun for valuable suggestions and pointing out horrible horrible grammer and spelling mistakes. I've made all the changes you had pointed and suggested.

Thanks again
musto

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Old 04-04-2005, 09:50 AM
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I think that the animated image of food plates is a bit fast. Perhaps it would be better with a calmer pace and fading transitions.

/Moltas

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Old 06-29-2005, 04:59 PM
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Just looking at past stuff...

Just looking at past requests...
I like the site, very clean...
Don't know if my dsl connection is a bit off today but the site loaded very slowly. Once it was up it seemed fine. Tried it a couple of time and it seemed slow for no apparent reason?

I like the simplicity of the site.

Lasa

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Old 06-29-2005, 05:39 PM
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Very nice, musto.

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