My first thread :D

[Yani Feyaerts]

I was a bored yesterday so decided to practice little bit. I love to hear some advice! It's a MClaren 650s if you're wondering
Before


After

 

[IamSam]

Hi Yani and welcome to PSG.

Your after image colors are a bit over-saturated and contrasty, especially the red. The over-satting of the blue in the car is better but it's a bit dark and some nice details are lost. The implied letter pressed text of the logo into the pavement is a great effect but could use a little perspective to add to it's believability.



I like the texture in the bottom of the text, it has a nice crushed pavement look to it.

All in all, a good job.

 

[chrisdesign]

Welcome to the forum Yani. Nice job of the car, though I agree with Sam, your treatment is overdone, the beautiful car has lost a lot of details.
Keep practicing and post some more of your work. I look forward to see it.

 

[kylelawso]

Looks very good, I also have a problem over saturating my colors. It is just too easy to go overboard and I find myself to keep saying "scale back, scale back, scale, ugh this is too hard" haha

 

[ayashi]

Nice one! Good job

 

[DannyOlivier]

Like Sam said I like the text on the pavement, the texture works really well with the road!

 

[Yani Feyaerts]

Thanks for all the comments guys! I know i was struggling to find the right saturation but i will watch it next time. I still have one question...
Is their any better effect to do the engraved text? because i just used the inner shadow to get to this effect.

 

[Jergon]

The red line and the logo are nice (except the letters' perspective, of course - the letters should be a little bit oblique to right side) but the car was OK on the "before" pic. You better should leave it without changing.