Waiting for you forever

[xversion1]

Hi! Here the stocks: http://www.mediafire.com/?q8o5qrc1edlg7fb http://www.mediafire.com/?xryrcnommpzxn2m
and my artwork:

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Give me some comments, thanks! ​

 

[Manda Burns]

I love how the guy's turning to dust while he sits like a stone looking away from a photo, that's stuck in a moment in time and probably engraved in his thoughts. The sun shining though is beautiful. I love the symbolism in this and how others can get their own feelings from it.

 

[braderz999]

I love the composition and lighting and the effect the man has

I don't really think the mirror/portrait really fits in though, if this weren't based on stock I would say get the man to look at a picture in his hand for more mystery and impact but overall it looks really good

 

[digitaltwist]

I love the composition and lighting and the effect the man has

I don't really think the mirror/portrait really fits in though, if this weren't based on stock I would say get the man to look at a picture in his hand for more mystery and impact but overall it looks really good

agree regarding the mirror. If you can tweak that to make it look like a natural fit in the picture I think it would look even better. Nice work though.

 

[Mogsy]

I agree about the mirror, it kinda looks superimposed to me as well and doesn't fit in with the rest of the image, I would have a mess around with the brightness, colours etc. myself personally - On the whole though great shot and great idea!

 

[dv8_fx]

And where have you been mogsy? Nice seeing you back.

 

[Mogsy]

Cheers mate, I know its been a while! Ohhh you know one thing after another (Nothing seriousl btw! haven't lost my mojo for PS - I have been keeping my hand in having a dip in here but haven't posted anything for a good while... As you know!

Thanks for the welcome 'back'

 

[peta62]

Hello,
I do agree with others about the mirror, as much as I understand she's the one he's waiting for, I think the picture is better without her. Additionally I do not like square pictures unless there is a reason and I do not see any here, so I would prefer to cut the lower part to get it into more natural dimensions. Just my opinion, I am not always right ;-)
Cheers,
Peter

 

[xversion1]

Hello,
I do agree with others about the mirror, as much as I understand she's the one he's waiting for, I think the picture is better without her. Additionally I do not like square pictures unless there is a reason and I do not see any here, so I would prefer to cut the lower part to get it into more natural dimensions. Just my opinion, I am not always right ;-)
Cheers,
Peter

Yeah! Thanks! I don't like square picture too. I want to reduce the height size of picture, but for another reason I have to keep the original size of background image.

 

[diamonddew]

Great feel

 

[longlivemedia]

That's a very artistic piece. While brown doesn't always work in portraying forlorn emotions, you made it work there.