Technically, you did a nice job as a retouching exercise. However, for a real job, I'm *completely* with ALB on the subject of freckles.
Zits are not permanent, so I remove them without even bothering to ask the subject - I've never had a complaint, and usually get a hearty "thank you". Same for dirt splatters. Rosacea is usually more long term, so I usually reduce its prominence but don't completely remove it.
OTOH, freckles are there to stay. I will usually slightly reduce their prominence, but I never completely remove them unless I've got an explicit request from the client. However, what usually happens is that the client sees what no freckles looks like, is horrified, says that it doesn't look anything like them, and asks instead for re-do with only a modest reduction in their strength.
Just my $0.02,
Tom M
PS - BTW, the only technical change I would recommend would be to brighten things up by 0.3 - 0.5 stop.