Unfortunately, there are some critical differences between the example photos you posted and your own photo.
(a) In three of the four example pix, everything except the car is almost completely desaturated, whereas in the remaining example photo, the bkgnd is not desaturated.
(b) The car in all of the example photos clearly has a color (ie, cream), whereas in your photo, it is essentially colorless (ie, black).
(c) The car in all of the example photos is light toned, so it's easy to see detail in it, as is. In contrast, it is difficult to see as much detail in a black car without major tonal tweaks.
(d) The background in the example photos is quite sharp, where in yours, the background is slightly blurry.
(e) Your image contains two cars, whereas all the example photos only contain one car. Cropping the red car out of your image removed important "breathing room" around the central subject.
Because of these, and other differences, some parts of the overall look of the example images simply can't be replicated on your image.
So, to serve as the launching point for further discussion, I made some quick tweaks to your image. For example, I even went so far as to push the saturation of the car through the roof to add some color to it (...it's now mostly blue, but it's also picking up strongly colored reflections of nearby objects) to help it stand out from a desaturated background. Anyway, see if there are any aspects of my tweaked version along the lines of what you had in mind. Don't forget to click on the in-line preview to view it at the full resolution of the version you submitted.
Tom M