This is my first composition work and I need advices

[Unguzov]

Here is it my first composition work - please advice me how to improve it.

 

[chrisdesign]

Very nice composite with good imagination Unguzov.
However, I would like to mention that the boy leans back slightly, but maybe that was your intention.

 

[hershy314]

Very nice composite with good imagination Unguzov.
However, I would like to mention that the boy leans back slightly, but maybe that was your intention.

I was thinking the same thing, maybe he is walking towards the top? Very interesting to say the least.

 

[Unguzov]

Thank you for your comments, chrisdesign and hershy314! I really wanted the girl to be slightly tilted to create a sense of artificial gravity. But perhaps it is very close to the top?

Very nice composite with good imagination Unguzov.
However, I would like to mention that the boy leans back slightly, but maybe that was your intention.

 

[egosbar]

great effort for first time , you will create great composites , good imagination

 

[Unguzov]

Thanks for the kind words, egosbar!

great effort for first time , you will create great composites , good imagination