Sunrise, I missed your latest post so I'm glad it came up again. I really like it. My only criticism is that the highlights are kind of blown out. I don't know what you were working with or if there is any possibility to bring out more detail. You can brings jpegs into camera raw as well as RAW files. If you haven't adjusted it there, you may want to try. But it might take selective exposure adjustments and burning, etc. assuming you even want to work on it anymore.
But I like it. I like the juxtaposition of color and B&W.