Specific Graphic Refresh / Improve

[Liam Harris]

Afternoon Guys , Would any of you please Refresh/Improve my graphic, I made it years ago basic as you can see its my familys business and i thought id ask on here to see if any1 will be kind enough the make it look abit better

 

[[ iLLuSioN ]]

Am I wrong or haven't you asked for a new logo a few month ago? Weren't there even examples?

 

[Liam Harris]

Am I wrong or haven't you asked for a new logo a few month ago? Weren't there even examples?

Yes but i wasnt a proper member then and and i dont remember seeing an example

 

[ex_teacher]

Here's a variation

 

[JeffK]

I'm really not a designer but been kicking this around for most the day...did the work so might as well post...
- Jeff

 

[Maduke]

Here's a sketch. If you like it maybe you can convince someone to work with it.