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Photo Manipulation New member, criticism and ideas needed!

Eggy

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#2
That's a nice beginning. :thumbsup:
Although it is fantasy keep in mind that only the real sky should display stars and not on top of the clouds and whales...
 

IamSam

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#3
Hello and welcome.

I don't have much to say about the content/composition.

But for opinions sake, I don't think that the starfield should be in front of the clouds, it should be behind them.

If Whales are to be flying in the clouds, the water could be hard to explain. They should be breaching the cloud tops and not solid water.
Example:
Screen Shot 2018-11-27 at 11.14.45 AM.png

The Whale on the left seems to be missing his left side flipper.

Perspectively speaking, the left side Whale would also be much larger than the other Whale since he's closer to the viewer. As it is they appear to be in the same perspective plane and there's no perceived depth between them.
Here's an example of perspective. (note no water here either)
Screen Shot 2018-11-27 at 11.14.57 AM.png

All in all it not a bad job. Keep up the work.
 

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