Some of my designs

[Hytham]

Hello guys!
I wanna show you some of my simple designs to know your feedback about them and get advices from you.

1.It was a compitition to create something inspired from the bowling ball :



2.Ramadan is an Arabian month which Muslims fast in it and do more good things "Ramadan Kareem" like a felicitation for Ramadan :



3.This words are a part of Arabic song and it's means "Everybody do what relieve him" LOL



4.Sacrifice with animals like sheeps and give meat and food to poor is a habit in Al Adha feast...and balloons for kids



Sorry for a lot of speech...waiting 4 ur comments ;)

[ibclare]

I especially like the bowling ball. Nice clean lines, good composition, cool idea!

Except it's a billiard ball

[Hytham]

Thanks a lot ibclare for your comment,glad u like the bowling ball
But i think there are another 3 designs here
I wanna any comment like "bad work" "you are loser" to support me plz

[Ivan Skoro]

It's bad, how about that?
But that first one is OK.

[Hytham]

It's bad, how about that?
But that first one is OK.

Thank you...but i feel some "Aggression" in this words : (how about that?)....
And i don't know the reason behind that !

[ibclare]

yeah, huh. Nothing like un-constructive criticism. Ignore it.

Yes, there are three other designs. So, since you want, I'll make some comments:

The last one is very child-like. Did you draw the lamb cause it's very cute and nicely made. The rest of the picture is just too cute for me, but could be great for a children's book.

The Ramadan is a nice one. The glow to the right of the text is throwing it off for me. It may partly be my screen - I've tried tilting it - but I think the problem is that you are using a white inner glow or layer painting ?? and that ends up looking mushy and not the kind of metallic glow I think you want.

The other is lacking in color contrast and composition. I guess it depends what it is made for but I find it boring and the shadow doesn't work for me.

I think your work has promise. Look to the first to see the kind of techniques that make for polished work. Have fun.

[DoTTGaMMa]

Other than the first image (the bowling ball type object), your designs lack continuity and flow.
When creating art you have to inspire words through a picture, which can be difficult- Yet you did well on with the ramadan image, it shows a sense of celebration and that is a good thing, but that picture gets a bit thrown off when the border of the photo is rounded off with a grey (were you trying to use it as a banner for a website??)
The last image... Well, that is just self-explanatory.

You have potential, but lack the ability to express it digitally.

[DigitalBlogTuts]

Awesome work! keep it up!

[Hytham]

Thank you ibclare and DoTTGaMMa for your important comments ^_^
Thank you DigitalBlogTuts glad u like them

[cucvht]

it is very useful and helpful for my job.