Cover for Facebook By Me

[Hytham]

Hello guys..i made this Facebook cover...i wanna know your suggestions if it need modify.
I wrote the second line with blur effect because i think it's reflect the meaning..i don't know if it looks good or not ?
and the lamp represent "Truth"..I made the second line sharper than the 1st because the truth is clear
Finally this quote by Ghandi

[admin]

Hello and welcome to PSG Hytham.

I like your banner and I like the message =)

My suggestions:
- My eye tends to read the second line first. If you want the reader to go for the first line instead then you should put it on top.
- I like the blur/transparency effect on the second line, and I like the texture of the background.
- I am not keen on the black shadow/outline effect on the first line, it's a bit harsh.
- The light is very yellow, you could reduce the saturation of it slightly.

Hope this helps some, just my .02

[Hytham]

Thanks a lot for your comment and advices
But i can't get something...i think you talking about the second line as the top one?...because the blur effect is on the top one.
I will try to change the top line to make eyes look at it firstly...i may change the position.
And i will decrease the saturation of the yellow light.

[Hytham]

oh i got you!...you are talking about this sentences: "The truth is still the truth, even if you are a minority of one."...

no the right sentences is "Even if you are a minority of one ,The truth is still the truth."...but i wrote the second part with Capital letters to make it clear like the truth!!...it maybe wrong..i don't know

[admin]

I wrote the second line with blur effect because

This made me think the top line was the second line.

Maybe try a capital E on the first line

[sassyprint]

I would try putting the top line with upper-case letters or bringing it out more. Just like Admin I focused in on the second and my brain red that one first. With that kind of sentence you want them to read the one on top first.

[sam123]

need improvement
change the font and color of the text in first line

decrease the opacity Yellow Color
looks more natural