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    eminem and me!

    tell me if there is anything wrong in the photo so i can improve it

    eminem and me!-dddddddd.jpg

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    Re: eminem and me!

    Nice Job SHARK X

    Keep it up.
    Cuando soy Bueno, soy muy BUENO
    Pero cuando soy malo, soy mucho MEJOR

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    Re: eminem and me!

    Since you asked I will tell you some things I see. This isn't a complete list but some things to help you improve it.
    eminem and me!-12.jpg
    In the red, the drop shadow doesn't belong here. On the ground maybe but you wouldn't see it in this photo.
    In the blue, you may try using the pen tool to get a better mask. Painting on a mask is great but not always the best choice.
    Eminem is blurrier than the rest of the photo and also brighter you'll need to fix this to make a better fit.

    Hope this comes across as constructive....seems like my c&c isn't always perceived that way. :(

    This is what I see.....others may see some other things too.
    Last edited by Stric9; 11-29-2011 at 04:20 PM.
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    Re: eminem and me!

    Maybe loose the flash on your jacket and i would also do a filter pass over the two of you when you have sorted all of Stric9's issues first, making you both slightly grainy and very subtly blurred, it will help mate.
    Keep going you will get there,we are all still learning and helping each other.


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    Re: eminem and me!

    Quote Originally Posted by Paul View Post
    Keep going you will get there,we are all still learning and helping each other.

    I couldnt agree more Paul.

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    Re: eminem and me!

    Quote Originally Posted by Stric9 View Post
    Since you asked I will tell you some things I see. This isn't a complete list but some things to help you improve it.
    Attachment 10976
    In the red, the drop shadow doesn't belong here. On the ground maybe but you wouldn't see it in this photo.
    In the blue, you may try using the pen tool to get a better mask. Painting on a mask is great but not always the best choice.
    Eminem is blurrier than the rest of the photo and also brighter you'll need to fix this to make a better fit.

    Hope this comes across as constructive....seems like my c&c isn't always perceived that way. :(

    This is what I see.....others may see some other things too.
    how does it look now?

    eminem and me!-se.jpg

    i didnt remove the flash on my jacket because some of the flash is on eminem's right arm and if i removed it it wont look good

 

 

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