Magic Act Show

[luna]

Images are all from DA,I have her make-up.



Criticism and comments are welcome

[LRG]

maybe the important parts of the compositon are too dark... you should change the focus from the background to the girl&cat.
i would blur the theater a bit, and move the girl and the cat with tha hat a bit higher towards the center, and lighten them a little.
anyway, good scene, luna

[luna]

maybe the important parts of the compositon are too dark... you should change the focus from the background to the girl&cat.
i would blur the theater a bit, and move the girl and the cat with tha hat a bit higher towards the center, and lighten them a little.
anyway, good scene, luna

Thank you for criticism, my main focus was on the girl. (her face)

Now it is very difficult to move the scene because all of filters,I'll try to blur the theater

ThX

[Zeealex]

it's a fantastic picture but poor cat :(

[fenix]

Images are all from DA,I have her make-up.

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Criticism and comments are welcome

As always a very nice work done luna! Tasteful colors and a good feeling all over! I have a very soft spot for that "hybrid" between reality and drawings myself. Luve it! Cést tres bien!

[luna]

As always a very nice work done luna! Tasteful colors and a good feeling all over! I have a very soft spot for that "hybrid" between reality and drawings myself. Luve it! Cést tres bien!

Thx :-*

[luna]

I tried to blur the background and darken it a bit so that the model pops out

What do you think?

[dv8_fx]

i like this better, luna.

Compared to the first, looks better.... the model is more defined. Maybe add a bit of blur on the curtains?

[LRG]

yeah now its definitely better. what about cropping a bit from the top?

[luna]

yeah now its definitely better. what about cropping a bit from the top?

I do not understand what you mean?