Polar Room

[Paul]

Another of my failed offerings.

[ibclare]

This is cute Belial. I like it. My only critique has to do with the mushroom cap. Might be my monitor but the highlights are almost totally blown out. More contrast would put the focus on your polar bear. What a juxtaposition Can you fix that?

[HillyBill]

i wouldn't have used a oval shape on the hole. does not look natural

[Digital4Hue]

I really like it. I do agree with what was said though, maybe not totally blown out but too close in tone to the bear, and the oval shape is ok but too sharp, kind of like sheet metal, maybe roughen up the edges and make them a little thicker. Looks really cool though.

[Paul]

Thanks guys, yeah the hole is a oval but i get the idea of rough edges to it.
Thanks again.

[Vafann]

I think it´s funny! Yes the hole is too sharp, but couldn´t you put some kind of bevel and emboss layer style around it or something?

[fenix]

oh my, i hope there was no animals hurt during the process of making this photo. You should have added a little light in the black and worked on the sides of the hole for to achieve some dept in it. it looks a bit too cut and past like it is now. Fun idea tho

[Paul]

Had a go at what you all addressed and then some.

[fenix]

aaah! a lot better mate! But ...the mail box, man! how could you have forgotten the mailbox?

[HillyBill]

yes much better!