here is my WILD WEST poster work :)

**anveshiano** · 10-30-2011, 08:02 PM

hi friends..
plz checkout my poster work...and let me know ur feedback

( this is poster is a composting of 3 images; 2 of them belongs to "red dead redemption game" , which are used as a background)

**Steve** · 10-30-2011, 08:54 PM

Welcome to PSG.
Over all it's a good start but the hat is all wrong.

**anveshiano** · 10-30-2011, 09:23 PM

thanks a lot steve..

Is der any wrong with dimensions or placement of hat..? i couldn't figure it out.. please suggest me.

**Steve** · 10-30-2011, 09:40 PM

To me it looks to small, to high on the head, and a completely different texture than the rest of the image.
To much contrast compared to the rest of the image.

Also don't forget to add shadow on the face because of the hat.

**anveshiano** · 10-30-2011, 09:53 PM

aww.. now i can see all those flaws in my image.. i will work on dem
cheers for ur reply..u really hav a gud eye for detail

**Stefano** · 11-09-2011, 03:27 PM

I like it, overall but agree about the hat. The girl doesn't look real but the guy from the photo of course does, sorta weird.

Good, clean composition though for a simple few layers poster.

Cool, love seeing peoples stuff!

-Stefano

**anveshiano** · 11-11-2011, 09:35 AM

Originally Posted by Stefano

I like it, overall but agree about the hat. The girl doesn't look real but the guy from the photo of course does, sorta weird.

Good, clean composition though for a simple few layers poster.

Cool, love seeing peoples stuff!

-Stefano

thanks my friend..
u were right about the girl..i cud have put some other real person instead of using a toon girl..
ny way thats an immature attempt..hehe..

**agentmoeller** · 11-12-2011, 12:55 PM

I say keep the toon girl, and posterize or desaturate the guy, add some grainy texture to both, and play with the opacity.

Agent

**sunrise** · 11-17-2011, 07:08 AM

well , UR work is good , and they right about the girl and the hat.

when i saw the pic I see something wrong , and the answered.

thnx 4 sharing UR pic .

**rasoN** · 11-19-2011, 07:37 PM

You can probably do much better,colors are not very good ,and the hat position and look overal looks bad.you should add shadow below the hat for the better appearance

Good luck with further working

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