Few pieces of typography

[CL3]

Few basic typography stuff I have done in the past few weeks not had much time ATM with work and stuff and limited access to the web. But thought i would share any comments or constructive criticism welcome thanks.

 

[Jessicayla]

Great job on these. I like the last one especially, it's very fun

 

[CL3]

Great job on these. I like the last one especially, it's very fun

Thanks dude.

 

[ibclare]

Hi CL3. I just saw these. I don't have any constructive criticism. The hip hop lighting impression is cool. I like the way feeling shattered also feels a little cramped. It works for me; adds to the emotional feeling. And I agree with Jessi, the last one is humorous and I like the colors. Oh, maybe one thought here. Just a very little bit of shadow under the peels to the background would make them seem more on the BG; and I think the shadows you have now are too dark. Thanks for sharing!

 

[Oh for Chrissake!]

Feeling shattered: If everything is supposed to have been dropped from a height, I would say spread the letters out a bit more like the spare glass all around. You can break it up quite a bit and the human eye will still recognize the font and be able to read it. Lots of room for creativity there.

 

[ibclare]

Good idea OFC. That would truly add some drama and interest.