The owl needs work as does the type. The spacing of the owl elements needs to be consistant. The straight lines of the owls brow needs to be more of a flowing curve in which the stroke in the center needs to be wider.
I personally think your chosen font doesnt do the logo any justice. Stick to...
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There appears to be an odd ghostly arm holding the little girl under the chin.
Sorry the image is small but does anyone have any ideas on what it could be?
Not sure if its just me but I feel a little uncomfortable with the way it was made. The concept has been copyied straight off the original with a few minor changes.
Being a logo designer myself, if I knew about one of my designs been copied like this, I wouldnt be that happy.
Im sure a logo...
You will need to know more than Ps to step into the world of freelancing. You will need to be strong in Illustrator and After Effects. Most clients like vector files and animation. I am speaking from experience here.
Good luck in pursuing you career.