Give me the comments pls???

[ciwecom]

Below the image is my first design book cover, i affraid my design no complete,then
pls give me the comment about this image.
thank you!!!!!

 

[Joy Foraker]

Looks nice and appetitzing! [oops] [oops] [oops]
Only thing I noticed is the type font looks a bit rough, does it look smoother when actual size?

Also there is some good research available on colors to use to compliment food. If interested, you could consult google, I've lost my bookmark.

All in all good work.

 

[Alistair]

Below the image is my first design book cover, i affraid my design no complete,then
pls give me the comment about this image.
thank you!!!!!

Are you foreign? (not english). Just curious [innocent] I like it... it is good. But like foraker said... its a bit to rough on the text

 

[ciwecom]

I amend again!! see

Pls, comment again!!!

 

[lindaw]

I like the overall design and color but the fonts are still jagged. Do you have anti-alias turned on and the font style as smooth? :}

 

[Alistair]

agreeing with lindaw, the text... its probably not set to smooth.

 

[Welles]

I think I'd try to use the three insert images without the white borders to see if lessening the visual focus on them would help keep the title and main image 'balanced' visually. Maybe try changing the white border for a thin one of the color you use below your title.

If you decide you like the borders, make sure they are all even. The border around the center image is not the same as the others to my eye.