Personal logo (Barhom Basri)

[Barhom Basri]

This is my first logo, CnC is needed!



Process: http://www.behance.net/gallery/Barho...l-logo/5875717

Deviantart: http://b2rhom.deviantart.com/#/d5kqotk

.. Peace ..
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[ibclare]

I like the idea, but your name gets lost. I'd like to see it rise out of its ordered place and be larger. Maybe even in a spotlight like the batman signal. OK, just kidding on the latter!

Also in the second version, I think it would be better if your radial gradient (?) had a brighter white in the middle. It looks too flat to me.

Don't let me forget to say, I love the little Barhom face!