Proposal Idea - Want opinions

[scarmack]

Hey guys, as some of you may know, I am a photographer/designer and one of my specialties is making custom sport posters. So its about that time in my life where I feel its right to take the next step and pop the question.

I plan on printing this out on canvas and having her open it on Christmas as her "big gift" and obviously she would just think its a picture and then bam, surprise.

What do you guys think?

 

[Hoogle]

Nice idea however that reads will marry you me I would rearrange the typography a bit and make a bolder font as by the time that has printed and bled on a canvas it may not be readable and I am guessing you want impact so make it clearer.

 

[iDad]

BTW. She'll see this and know it's coming....... Girls know what their man is up to...DOH

 

[scarmack]

Nice idea however that reads will marry you me I would rearrange the typography a bit and make a bolder font as by the time that has printed and bled on a canvas it may not be readable and I am guessing you want impact so make it clearer.

I made some changes to it, I put the "Will you" together and then "Marry" in the middle. I'm looking for a better font now, I want to keep it "girly" "lovey" rather than a manly font like impact. I use dafont.com its a pretty cool site.

BTW. She'll see this and know it's coming....... Girls know what their man is up to...DOH

I covered my tracks haha

 

[iDad]

Film it while she opens it

 

[egosbar]

rearrange the words , doesnt read right , good idea but are you maaaaaaaaaaaadddddddddddddddddddddddddd lol

 

[ALB68]

Yep, the type needed to be rearranged..otherwise I like it!