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[Hytham]

Hello guys !
as usual i didn't find a suitable subject to make design for it..so i made three colored areas with Egyptian's flag colors..and then i completed this design !...need your opinions please

 

[ibclare]

Very interesting. First impressions: I think the sunburst could be larger and more subtle. Then the mirrored gradient line, the blue and white, might be more interesting if they switched direction so they also looked to be reflection. The gradient itself would be better to go behind the reflected letters. But I'm just taking a more "realistic" approach to the reflection, so it's just a matter of my humble opinion.

 

[Hoogle]

well not sure what you are trying to achieve here but as you are stating a place I would like to assume this as an advert of some place ie come to Egypt as an advert it can be a lot more criticized. You have a sun so promoting warmth but surrounded it in cold metal colours and textures, yes the black vignette could work. the sun could be done with more orange into it. the text could do with sharpening up loose the glow, maybe add a bit of 3d depth to it otherwise it is flat, the reflection needs to be treated more like a reflection and faded down and scaled down use the transform too hold down control and warp it a bit to the side to match the suns direction maybe replace the blue/black metal elements with sand dunes or even have a reference to the pyramids in the background. But that is me talking from a psychological advertising point of view, if it is just something for yourself then go with what you like. Sorry if it sounds negative but that is my opinion