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[Argos]

I like the light and pattern on the letters.
What I would change, is the repetitive shape, pattern, and light on the letter "e", and being three in that short text doesn't help.

Cheers!

 

[IamSam]

Hello and welcome.

The background is too dark. The B, the L, the I, and part of the V all blend too well with the background. There needs to be more contrast.