Feedback on another logo :)

[stufflol]

Just want to know what people think of this for my friends catering van;



I know I have been asking for alot of feedback on stuff , but I value a gurus opinion

 

[iDad]

my opinion, remove the shadow or lighten it up a bit......

 

[stufflol]

the drop shadow you mean?

 

[iDad]

if you used drop shadow yes that

 

[ibclare]

I agree with iDad, it's a bit too much. I'd like to see some but right now it actually makes the print look muddy or something, especially the quality fast food. That might be better unenhanced. On the business name, have you tried embossing?

 

[Dataflow]

i would have the shadows but not so far from the text and less soft but leave the shadow on the hats.
also i would remove the vignette around the logo

 

[stufflol]

Forgot to remove thr drop shadow of the shading layers so it became dense :S think this looks better?

 

[Dataflow]

better.
the shadow on the main title look good but the ones on the small text still are to much,
my eye should be drawn to the name of the business but because of those shadows my eye is drawn to "Quality Fast Food"

 

[dv8_fx]

As well as the distance... lessen by a pixel or 2.