After Effects I need a critique!

[cybalicist]

This is my newest video, I need to know what people think about it. I want honest answers because I am looking to develope and better these videos.

youtube dot com
/watch?v=mwAOVW1u2ZU

 

[anthony2070]

I'm still new here but I like it.

 

[JustinR]

First it was confusing, then I laughed. Although it's hard to dislike a video with little children, but you should have worked more on the script, hard to understand what is going on, effects was mediocre but with time and prectise they will improve.
5/10

Next time try to embed video properly:

 

[antonyw]

It's not bad for a beginning. Keep working man, AE is practice and experience

 

[Medjai]

video is private i can't view it!

 

[AnotherMiscreation]

I new as well and need all the critique I can get, and love to return the favor. But your video is now private, so please share it again.

You can also check out our family youtube channel called Another Miscreation.

 

[Steve]

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