Logo no2

[krisos1]

Before an hour I have finished this logo.A person who make a request wanted (he is from zambia)
''hello can u make me a logo please
shape: a shield
object: a crown
colour: shiny silver
text 1: Dar Kings FC
text 2: We Will Rock You''
I would tell me what is your opinion about this logo?Is it possible to explain my mistakes? thanks a lot

 

[Inkz]

You might want to watermark your image if it's for a client...

And Text 1 doesn't seem to have the "FC" on the shield.

Very nice logo though.

 

[krisos1]

You might want to watermark your image if it's for a client...

And Text 1 doesn't seem to have the "FC" on the shield.

Very nice logo though.

Τhanks a lot for your help! This logo is for an online game but how can improve my watermark?There is some tutorials? please post them.About FC you have right I will fix it! :redface:

 

[krisos1]

This is another version....