My first Work shared with you !!

[the cute]

Hello guys !!
this is my niece with a retro design : love the colors :


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No Signature was made in the picture (it was a present lol)

 

[Paul]

Better than your other work, but the image still needs something?

 

[the cute]

like what paul ?? tell me man :naughty:

 

[Paul]

Maybe loose the forest at the bottom and add a font or something else, i just can't put my finger on it sorry.

 

[the cute]

she lives there that why i put the forest in the design, i did put a font on it but it wasnt cool ..
anyway thx man ..
until my next work
see ya

 

[scoop2622]

her head looks smushed from top to bottom i would streach it out well... up also behind her there is alot going on and to her right (camera left) its just emptyness and i do agree with paul on the forest.... but not bad at all

 

[Fiza_fairy]

nice woork

 

[ibclare]

Perhaps if you were to place some of the curly branches (like those behind her but maybe more woodsy) on the bottom left, that would give it a balance, and taking out the forest would be OK because it would still be represented.

From my POV all it really needs is a levels adjustment. It lacks contrast and though the softness throughout is nice, I'd like to see that constrained to the BG and make the subject pop just a bit.

Just my thoughts at first look. I like it. :mrgreen:

 

[tobe]

hey,
i think the idea is good but not planned properly, the images do not merge together well, maybe if you use a more stylized approach to the trees in the foreground and the mountains in the background?
right now it just looks like a few pictures put together, perhaps it should look like one complete image.
maybe this is of somehelp, i know its a lot different than what you have done but was just trying to make my point of the images blending as one.

 

[CGMR]

I like it. Looks nice.