New design...feedback please :)

[Hytham]

Hello guys..I liked this very sad quote so i decided to make Facebook cover for it...I need you opinions please..how can i make it better ?

Thanks :>

 

[Dreamers]

nice one,..

I know summer colors makes peoples happy so you might wanna use that as a background just my smiling thoughts....

 

[Hytham]

Thank you Dreamers for your comment

I think you talking about the blue and yellow colors...yes i noticed that the blue text may give happy feeling...but sadly i didn't mean that ......but i think yellow is sad color.

 

[Hytham]

Is it bad that much ?

 

[Frey]

I like it. I don't know why I keep seeing it as some sort of business card.

 

[Lindysaducos]

it's very cute! <3 and I like the quote! and i love your color combination

 

[Hytham]

Vampiremcmuffin: yes i think that's because it need to be more abstract!...idk

Lindysaducos: Thank u for ur comment..glad u like it :>

 

[longlivemedia]

It's a good design, but remember that the most important aspect of it is the quote. If you do make some edits or alterations, make sure that the central element will always be the words and not the supporting pictures.

 

[Hytham]

Nice advice longlivemedia..thank you

 

[scyechilde]

i like it

 

[Daniela]

I think it would be nice to integrate the text with the image in some way. Maybe something like this. The only problem is that the background is a bit to dark and does not convey a 'happy' mood. But in a way that also goes hand in hand with the quote as it is suggesting that a sad smile is better than no smile

 

[Hytham]

Thank you Daniela ..it's really maybe better
by the way i made the background dark to convey sadness..i wanted to make mix between hapiness "the smile" and sadness "the cutted paper on the dark street"