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New flyer designs November 2013 *feedback wanted*
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ibclare
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Nicely done.
Regarding the second: it seems kind of spread out too much for my taste. As I like to tell people: white space is very important. Bring your text further away from the borders or it feels cramped and throws off the design balance. The model is vertically distorted and I am not sure why you did that. She is elongated and the shoulders look too narrow. In fact, I think it would be a nice touch to widen those shoulders some and bleed them off the edge. The notes are what look especially spread out. Maybe make some more in a smaller size and/or one behind her hair or something like that. If you make the model larger and bring her closer to the left edge, you could move that symbol to another position and I think it would balance better.
The top one is well done and my only critique is that I think the border on the text at the bottom is distracting. Just plain would work better for me. The title has the effects, but the information should be clear and unadorned. IMHO.
Good job!
Regarding the second: it seems kind of spread out too much for my taste. As I like to tell people: white space is very important. Bring your text further away from the borders or it feels cramped and throws off the design balance. The model is vertically distorted and I am not sure why you did that. She is elongated and the shoulders look too narrow. In fact, I think it would be a nice touch to widen those shoulders some and bleed them off the edge. The notes are what look especially spread out. Maybe make some more in a smaller size and/or one behind her hair or something like that. If you make the model larger and bring her closer to the left edge, you could move that symbol to another position and I think it would balance better.
The top one is well done and my only critique is that I think the border on the text at the bottom is distracting. Just plain would work better for me. The title has the effects, but the information should be clear and unadorned. IMHO.
Good job!