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[St Vladimir]

Hello! Here's my new work. This photo I made by myself and put some blur outside. Anything special but interesting texture. What do you think about?

 

[Sean]

Cool photo and I like the line. Did you write that yourself? I thought maybe you could tone down the blur around the edges. (vignette) It should only add to the feel of the piece, not distract from it. And one more thing: the photo itself looks fuzzy/blurry in the middle, but that might just be .jpeg artifacts. =/
Oh yeah, and turn on antialiasing on the text...I hate jaggedys.

 

[Welles]

That's an interesting and thought provoking composition, St. Vladimir.