Nice work, and lots of hours in front of the PC screen! I won’t mention the obvious areas that could use some rework as you have noted them yourself. One thing that wasn’t mentioned, and it’s probably just me. In the second picture I would have removed the small line (maybe phone) from the picture. But then again that’s just my preferance.
I’m tackling the same type of restoration work on older, actually, to me, ancient photographs, so I can really relate to the hours of work you put into achieving the results you have. I’m not that experienced with PS so other than the basics stuff it’s still mostly new to me. Some on the this forum (I’m terrible on remembering names to give credit) have made suggestions by just dropping PS terminology that I’m not familiar with so off I go using the help section and or Googling for answers and darned if I don’t find a solution to the problem.
I’ll post some of my most recent B&A work tonight for all to scrutinize. Some I posted previously so it may be the same old same old to some. The last one I finished to night is of a distant relatives store front and it has been my biggest challenge yet.