New painting - what do you guys think?

[webwize]

Just finished a new painting using Photoshop, hand drawn and then scanned in for coloring. Would love your thoughts. Really struggles with the hair but I will keep practicing


webwize

 

[Paul]

Nice job mate, the hair looks ok maybe go with three or four varying layers of thickness and shape to brush hair in. The upper body as no definition but hey thats a minor factor, the four lines at the bottom i know what you tried to do mate, but it just looks like a saggy old womans belly lol.
Finally boo boos reflections off a little.
Great attempt though mate, love the background lines also.

 

[webwize]

Cheers Paul, I see what you mean about the belly, I think nxt time I will rely on the inking a little less and spend a little more time painting in the detail On the whole I am happy with it, havn't had very much time recently but I still think I am improving

 

[Paul]

Defo mate, keep going you will get there.

 

[john smith0341]

Really good work very neat and clean and as well as so attractive painting.What technique you use?

 

[aiesha]

Congrats!!! Enjoy your achievements. You did a great job.Very good.Keep it up.

 

[Ry777]

looks great!

 

[DomQuichotte]

Not bad ;-)

 

[vizzwebsolutions]

Not decent one. But definitely you did good effort.

 

[chitkaran]

Painting looks nice mate.. And yes, as Paul mentioned.. work on the shadows and try to detail the parts as much as possible. Cheers mate .. !!

 

[Vetoed]

Looks great. Just cot a tab;;et recent and Im still trying to figure out how to use it properly

 

[massy]

It's okey mate...
From the beginning some error will be occurred with time it will be okey.Over all it looks cool innovative art.

 

[Paul]

Massy i removed your advert siggy.