Photo Manipulation sky sea

[yasmin]

this my work
give me your opinion and give me some advice to improve my work

 

[gedstar]

Hi

Nice work but I think you have some transparency issues with the Whale and clouds

 

[Eggy]

Nice work.
But as I can see the whale is in front of that cloud and the whale shouldn't be transparant at all...
If you do want a cloud in front of the whale you can add it with a cloud brush in the desired color.

 

[yasmin]

Nice work.
But as I can see the whale is in front of that cloud and the whale shouldn't be transparant at all...
If you do want a cloud in front of the whale you can add it with a cloud brush in the desired color.

Hi

Nice work but I think you have some transparency issues with the Whale and clouds


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i want a cloud in front of the whale but the cloud are transparent so you can see the whale !

 

[Argos]

I agree with the comments, you can do it a little bit transparent on the corners of the cloud but the entire cloud make it look more fake.
I like the image, as personal opinion i would remove the other animals, the whale have enough visual impact and i would make the image cleaner and better visually.

Cheers!

 

[gedstar]

Hi the issue with your clouds is that they are behind the Whale so you would not see the clouds in front

Here's a quick example of what I mean, here the clouds are in front of the whale, as you can see in the first example you can still see most of the Whale through the clouds but it still looks like it's behind the clouds



and behind the Whale this is what it would look like

 

[yasmin]

Hi the issue with your clouds is that they are behind the Whale so you would not see the clouds in front

Here's a quick example of what I mean, here the clouds are in front of the whale, as you can see in the first example you can still see most of the Whale through the clouds but it still looks like it's behind the clouds

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and behind the Whale this is what it would look like

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thank you

 

[yasmin]

They are right the whale looks transparent, the clouds are behind it but we can still see them.

yes i get the idea thank you

 

[JazzyScotsman]

I was always taught that every images tells, or should tell, a story. You present your subject matter beautifully, but I'm not seeing your story. I'm just seing beautiful images. Where is your point of drama? What is this image supposed to be telling me? Why should I be looking at it? Where have you placed the relevance in your image? Please regard this as a constructive criticism. A point for consideration.