Logo for my product design shop

[pauloalex_98]

 

[IamSam]

Nice. It has some symmetry issues with the semi circles that throw off the eye slightly, but all in all a solid design.



Also some odd lines, missing corner, and leftovers

 

[polarwoc]

I was going to point out the remnant lines and ask if it was part of the design or were overlooked, but Sam already pointed them out.

If width of the triangle side depicted by Green line is 1 inch, the Red line seems 1.2 inch. That is to say the sides of the triangle are not with similar width - is that intentional?

Otherwise, the design is excellent.

 

[pauloalex_98]

Thank you for the criticism and the help! I knew there was something odd with the design

 

[[ iLLuSioN ]]

Your logo doesn't currently work in postage size, e.g. for promotional gifts on USB sticks, pens, etc.

The lines are a bit too thin and "PRODUCT DESIGN" too small

 

[pauloalex_98]

I already finished the missing lines and the geometry problem in the right down corner of the upper triangle, I'm gonna try to work on the inches of the lines later but I don't think it's necessary, it looks good either way

 

[IamSam]

I'm gonna try to work on the inches of the lines later but I don't think it's necessary, it looks good either way

Well................actually it is necessary and it does matter. How it looks, or better yet the accuracy of your lines is a direct reflection of your skill set. Your logo is a representation of your company and what it can do. Anyone viewing the logo could notice it's off and quickly form a negative opinion. You can obtain accuracy with ease using shape tools.

 

[polarwoc]

...I'm gonna try to work on the inches of the lines later but I don't think it's necessary, it looks good either way

That sounded like a compromise. Please do not do that if you are yourself dissatisfied. That will keep bothering you each time you see the logo or when someone comments on it later. On the other hand, if the sides of different thickness on the geometric shapes is intentional and all stakeholders are happy, you could go ahead.

 

[pauloalex_98]

Fixed it

 

[pauloalex_98]

Your logo doesn't currently work in postage size, e.g. for promotional gifts on USB sticks, pens, etc.

The lines are a bit too thin and "PRODUCT DESIGN" too small

The logo isn't meant for that. It's for a product design shop where I sell my designs, I just need the logo to represent my shop. I'm not gonna print the logo anywhere.

 

[[ iLLuSioN ]]

Fixed it

Really?

 

[pauloalex_98]

Really?
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Maybe it's not the best logo but you don't need to try and push me around for not coming up with the best logo ever... I have made better logos, this is just something simple that I need to represent my shop.

 

[marywilliams]

Good Job! liked it

 

[pauloalex_98]

Good Job! liked it

Thank you! Appreciate it